Writing prompt: Write a compare-and-contrast analysis of how culture shapes the heroes in Heart of a Samurai and Black Ships Before Troy. Use transition words in your draft to help clarify relationships of ideas.

The pic is what I put for the first part then for the rough draft I put: Manjiro and Achilles cultures helped to shape them in different ways. Lets start with Manjiro. His culture shaped him to be respectful and relatively quiet but also a curious person. His culture taught him that he would have to follow the family line of jobs on his fathers side of his family. Achilles culture shaped him to be rather courageous and strong, maybe religious, but it also shaped him to be rather reckless. His culture taught him that if he went to battle he would most likely live a short life but be remembered by generations to come. Although, both of the boys cultures had a similar view on strength.

And for the final draft:

Manjiro and Achilles cultures helped to shape them in different ways. Lets start with Manjiro. His culture shaped him to be respectful and relatively quiet but also a curious person. His culture taught him that he would have to follow the family line of jobs on his fathers side of his family. Achilles culture shaped him to be rather courageous and strong, maybe religious, but it also shaped him to be rather reckless. His culture taught him that if he went to battle he would most likely live a short life but be remembered by generations to come. Although, both of the boys cultures had a similar view on strength. The heroes in Heart of a Samurai and Black Ships Before Troy reflect their culture's expectations for strength.The heroes in Heart of a Samurai and Black Ships Before Troy reflect their culture's expectations for strength. .

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