Need a hook for an essay on "why P. E shouldn't be an elective, it should be required" my 3 reasons are 1. its fun, 2. you need exercise, 3. if you get p. e automatically then you get another elective to choose
just need the hook

tldr: start with a question, be descriptive, be mysterious (cover it in your essay, don't put all your information into the beginning), connect it to your essay/thesis

Explanation:

hi there!

it's a little tough to make a hook for something if you don't know the rest of the essay, but i'll try to lay out the hook criteria for you to make it a lot easier to come up with!

for a hook you're trying to look for something that attracts attention. think of any articles or books you've read that caught you with a good sentence and try to incorporate that into your essay.

a few good rules of thumb are:

start with a question. sometimes questions can leave readers curious and keep their attention!

be descriptive. a boring, simple hook is nothing fun to read.

leave it a mystery.  as a reader, you can easily get hooked by mysteries and open points. curiosity just works too well.

connect your essay with the hook. your hook should be connected to your thesis statement and shows how important your view is in your essay.

in the short story the slip-over sweater by jesse stuart, the main character and narrator shan is friends with grace, an intelligent girl he has known since childhood and with whom he used to be in love.

at the beginning of the story, shan believes he’s no longer in love with grace, but loves jo-anne instead. in order to buy a slip-over sweater and have jo-anne wear it so that the other students would know she loved him too, shan takes a loan at the bank.

while jo-anne is wearing shan’s sweater, his friend grace starts to wear another popular boy’s one, roy’s sweater. because of that, the other students begin to pay attention to grace and compliment her perseverance and effort. they admire her for walking 5 miles to school every day, despite the weather, and still getting the best grades. shan, who knows all of that for a fact, says, as the narrator, ‘and i knew she had the durability and the toughness of a storm-battered mountain oak.’ he compares his friend’s strength – not only physical, but also of character – to an oak tree, whose wood is known for being sturdy.

as the story goes on, shan changes his behavior out of concern for the debt he has to pay at the bank. his new girlfriend jo-anne never asks him what is wrong nor offers any sort of . instead, she breaks up with shan for not being as fun as she thought he was supposed to be. grace, however, not only asks about shan’s problem, but him make the money he needs. shan can’t but notice how different the girls are and what a wonderful person grace is.   even though he used to find jo-anne prettier at the beginning of the story, he now says, ‘grace was as beautiful as our mountain was in april, prettier than a blossom of wild phlox or a mountain daisy.’ his comparing grace to a mountain or something that exists on a mountain (such as a mountain oak or daisy) certainly has important meaning since shan loves the mountain and everything about it and he knows the mountain thoroughly. shan also loves and knows grace as completely as he does the mountain.

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