Can you guys please help me paraphrase this? Paul entered the college room clever and smiling. His clothes had been a trifle outgrown, and the tan velvet at the collar of his open overcoat turned into frayed and worn; but for all that there has been some thing of the dandy about him, and he wore an opal pin in his neatly knotted black 4-in-hand, and a crimson carnation in his buttonhole. This latter adornment the school someway felt become now not properly big of the contrite spirit befitting q boy beneath the ban of suspension.

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explanation:

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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