Plz answer quickly u get 15 points. Q 9: Which sentence uses a comma incorrectly? Be sure to choose the
INCORRECT sentence. *
O Jane and Jim drove to Cleveland, and visited the art museum.
O Terry cooked, and we ate a delicious dinner.
O The dedication for the new building is set for Wednesday, June 30, 2021.
O Although the weather was unusually cold, there was not enough snow to ski.

Jane and Jim drove to Cleveland, and visited the art museum.

Jane and Jim drove to Cleveland, and visited the art museum.

Explanation:

There is no reason to put a comma after Jane and Jim because the sentence is one phrase which does not need to be separated.

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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