Part E Next, write briefly about how you revised your essay, addressing the following points:

Did you revise certain sections of the explication?
What was the reasoning behind your decision to revise those sections?
How do you feel about the results of the revisions?
Analyze your choices in revision based on the checklist. How does your essay align with the revision checklist?
Type your response in the space provided.

explanation:

b the manazanar relocation center was located in california. it was used to keep japanise from spying on america.

the reasons for the harsh treatment, is because japan used tourist to take pictures and snapshots of pearl harbor.

many americans were afraid that the japanise would betray them for their mother country. through and means necessary. this means that, the leadership in japan is a lot different than it is here. culture and family ties has much to do with their outlook and worldview.

b. cronkite, a trusted television personality, declared that the war was unwinnable and told the american people that the government had better find a way out

even though it went against everything the news anchors typically stood for, cronkite voiced an opinion and took a stance, telling the us that there was no way they were going to win, the war was going to end in a stalemate.