Compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows: Original: My father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more.
Revised: My father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.

What was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence? (10 points)

a
A longer phrase was converted to a single word.
b
A modifier that did not add meaning was removed.
c
Redundant phrases were eliminated.
d
Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.

D

Explanation:

They replaced disliked with hated, so they replaced it with a synonym.

D. Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.

Explanation:

Disliked was used twice, but was replaced the second time with a synonym.

answer: #1 is (a) however

explanation:

anyone who was dealing with communism in soviet union in his time had an ideal picture of equality, freedom, the struggle of the working class for a better future, the success of the aristocracy's overthrow and the emancipation of subjugation.   however, anyone who would go to soviet union to see the functioning of the communist system, would be convinced that it was about sad people, about everyday bad life, about the brutal attitude of communist leaders, about ill obsession to completely exterminate every thought on aristocracy. thus, orwell wanted to show all the absurdity, the brutality of the system, the unbearable rule of suspicious morality, the ignorant people who try to play professionally.

the answers are: b. and e.