Story long way down #8

The balance includes both the fees for service and the shipping charges. is this sentence incomplete or complete?

Which revision, if any, best fixes the bolded (capitalized in this case) part of the sentence? female cardinals, a somewhat drab bird compared to the males, blend in well with their environment. no change somewhat drab birds a somewhat drab's bird somewhat drab bird's

What does hofmann use of the pronoun it imply about the sister feeling about gregor