English, 28.02.2021 04:00 mimigg0621

Which revision would make this paragrapn stronger Delete the words "a little more than twice."
First, the issue of greater fuel efficiency is helping
to remedy climate change. If all the cars on our roads
got 50 miles per gallon, greenhouse emissions
produced by automobiles would be cut enormously. A
car that gets 25 miles per gallon produces about a
little more than twice as much carbon dioxide as a car
that gets 50 miles per gallon, Greater fuel efficiency
reduces the greenhouse gases implicated in climate
change.
Add this sentence at the end: "Fuel efficiency can
save people money over time."
Revise the topic sentence to "Fuel efficiency
reduces air pollution."
Delete the sentence: "Greater fuel efficiency
reduces the greenhouse gases implicated in
climate change."

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Delete the words a little more than twice.
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