Read the following passage, which contains a shift in tone: I am writing to request that our school add a soccer program to its list of sports. Soccer is growing in popularity around the country, and as of now Huntington Middle School is one of the only schools in the area
that ain't got it! Soccer's sweet because it leads to physical fitness and
teamwork - it also promotes other cultures and helps you learn about
the world, which is rad.

Which of the following revisions best corrects the shift in tone and maintains
a formal style throughout?