Open the Notebook tool () and read the first draft of your memoir from a different perspective to make it better. Copy the draft and paste it below. Then use the methods outlined here to improve your writing. Add sensory words to your descriptions. Refer to this resource to find suitable sensory words.
Mark the verbs in your sentences. Use a thesaurus to replace weaker verbs with strong, specific verbs.
Rewrite some sentences using dialogue instead of description.
Look for sentences where using a simile will strengthen your writing.
Write three new beginning sentences for your memoir and select the best one.

Take the following paragraph and write two separate paragraphs based on it. be sure to properly cite both parenthetically (don’t worry about a works cited) using this: (henderson). 1.) the first paragraph should contain a direct quote from the provided paragraph (the paragraph below). 2.) the second paragraph should contain a paraphrase of the provided information (the paragraph below). trees are in that they provide clean air. trees take in harmful gases from the air such as carbon dioxide, which is what people exhale from their lungs, and turn it into oxygen, which is what we inhale. they complete this process through photosynthesis, which requires carbon dioxide and then releases oxygen. without trees acting as nature's natural filter, the air would quickly become unbreathable to humans.

Based on your reading of act i of julius caesar, to whom is the character of cassius most loyal?

Plz ! ungent source information and notes should be taken 1. on loose-leaf notebook paper 2. on separate note cards 3. in a spiral notebook