Remember the sound effects that begin the play. Wind and giggles dissolve into the tortured moaning of a child and the distress of those who surround her. In what ways, do these effects foreshadow later events?

type of error:

the error in the sentence is a "dangling modifier". a dangling modifier is a phrase, word or clause that "dangles" because there is not target to modify. in this case, "after mopping the floor" is the dangling modifier since it has no word to modify. the noun "house" cannot mop the floor; therefore there is a mistake in the writing of the sentence.

she look beautiful

explanation:

i love it she is now my favorite character

"the sandy walls seemed to collapse in on themselves"

and

"the bloodshot waters seemed to have no bottom"