ANYONE HAVE THE TIME TO READ THIS AND TELL ME WHAT TO DO TO IMPROVE? PLEASE IT WOULD MAKE MY DAY *Snow Day*

*Bill 12 years old

*Joe Bills friend 11 years old

*SCENE 1

*TIME, PLACE, BASIC SETTING, ETC.*

*Narrator, It was a cold winter morning in the middle of January our Characters Bill and Joe(they are BFs)are having fun during a snow day when they hear a loud noise.

*Bill*What was that Noise?

*Joe* I have no idea lets go find out.

*Bill*Yeah it sounded like it came form the forest over there. Lets go!.

*Narrator* The to children wonder into the woods in search of the noise they have heard.

“BANG!!!”

.*Bill* WHOA

Joe* (Whispers) Be quite theres something up there.

Bill* (Says in a low voice)Its an alien spaceship!

*SCENE ENDS*

Scene 2

Bill* Lets hide behind this bush.

*Joe.*Wow thats so weird are you sure?

*Bill.*Im sure. (Whispers)Uh-oh I think the Alien heard us!

Joe* What makes you think that?

Bill* Look!

Narrator* Joe looks over Bill to see the alien fitted in what looks like armor wobbles over to where they are hiding.

Joe* We got to get out of here!!

They Jump out of the bush and the alien looks frightened. It turns around and begins to run wabble away.

Joe*Wait we didn't mean to scare you!!

Bill* I think hes more afraid of us then we are of him.

Joe* Yeah, but we’ve got to help him hes not from here.

Bill* I agree and maybe we will be able to make this Duo a Trio.

Joe*Agreed Lets go!

Narrator* The Duo try to find clues on where the alien has went.

Bill* Joe, its getting late and we can’t find him.

Joe*Here!! A footprint!

Bill* Nice it looks like he went into the cave…

Joe*There he is! In the cave.

Narrator* The boys Cautiously enters the cave where they hear a slight rumbling and a CRASH.

Bill*(Coughs)Joe are you ok?

Joe*(Wheezes) Yeah but I think the cave fell in.

Bill* Yeah.

Joe* Wheres the Alien?

Bill* I think that he is on the other side of the wall.

Joe*We have to save him!

Bill* I know but its pitch black we are going to need to get supplies.

Narrator* The boys return to Joes house where they go into Joes Bedroom Where they got 2 Flashlight Glowsticks and Walkie Talkies.

Joe* I think that we are ready to save a alien!

END OF ACT 2

Scene 3

Narrator*The Boys return to the cave to help the alien. While Joe goes on top of the hill where the entrance to the cave is located while Bill goes in the cave to try find an opening.

Bill* I think that I may have found a small hole but I cant seem to slip through it.

Joe* Ok Ill keep looking up here if I find any holes ill let you know.

Bill* Ok, A

Joe* Bill? Bill! Are you ok!?!

Bill* Yeah Yeah Im fine but there a bigger problem now.

Joe*Whats That?

Bill* The Aliens stuck under a rock!!

(The alien squirms and wiggles but cant get free.)

Joe*Hold on Im on my way!

Narrator*Bill looks down at the alien and sees he wont survive much longer so Bill takes matters into his own hands.

Bill* I have to save this alien!

(Bill Puts his hand on each side of the rock and begins to pull as hard as he cans)

Bill*(Grunts) Come On!!

Narrator* The rock begins to rise slowly but Bills strength is fading.

Bill*(Whimpers) I cant hold it much longer……

Joe* Hang in there Im on my way!

(The alien sees the effort and determination in Bills face and begins to help in the lifting of the rock)

Bill* All..most..there..

Narrator*As Bill and the alien strain to lift the Huge rock Joe runs as fast as he could to get back to where the where and just as the had used the last amount of there strength trying to lift the rock….Joe leaps into action and with there combined strength the alien shimmies out of underneath the rock. And with a loud thud the rock falls. But everything beings to shake… For The cave is CAVING IN!!

Bill* (Yells) WE’VE GOT TO GET OUT OF HERE!!

Joe*WE WILL NEVER MAKE IT!

(The alien grabs the two boys and takes off running bolt at top speed out of the cave just as the roof falls in. The alien sets them down and bows as if it was saying thank you.)

Bill*(Pants)Whoa what just happened?

Joe*(Mumbles) I have no idea.

(The alien looks at the two boys and pats them gently and there heads. As if he was saying Good Bye. The alien bolts out of sight and soon they see the alien ship fly over there heads out into the unknown universe.)

Bill* The alien saved our lives.

Joe* Yeah.

(As they talk about what has just happened something falls from the sky)

(Clash!)

Bill* What is it?

Joe*Its a figurine...an alien figurine. But what does it mean?

Bill*I think it means never to forget…

Joe* Yeah, Ill never forget today.

Narrator* They boys pretured from the forest and walk toward the sunset arms hung over one another toward the place they call home.

Bill*Yeah, me neither. But we can both agree… it was a great snow day.

*MOVIE/PLAY ENDS*