Question 1 of 5 Which revision of the passage best improves its clarity and flow?
My parents always go hiking on the weekends in fact they took us to
the state park just last Saturday
A. On the weekends, my parents always go hiking in fact they took us
to the state park just last Saturday
B. My parents, always go hiking on the weekends, in fact they took us
to the state park just last Saturday
C. My parents always go hiking on the weekends. In fact, they took us
to the state park just last Saturday
D. In fact they took us to the state park just last Saturday, because
my parents always go hiking on the weekends.

Read the paragraph. theodore roosevelt was the greatest president because as a leader of the progressive party, he brought about much-needed social, political, and economic reform. one of his economic reforms was to break up many large business trusts. by doing so, he took economic power out of the hands of the wealthy and powerful corporations and placed it in the hands of the ordinary people. theodore roosevelt’s reform policies, known as the square deal, to give the average citizen an equal share of opportunities. which sentence is the thesis of this paragraph? theodore roosevelt was the greatest president because as a leader of the progressive party, he brought about much-needed social, political, and economic reforms. one of his economic reforms was to break up many large business trusts. by doing so, he took economic power out of the hands of the people and placed it in the hands of the ordinary people. theodore roosevelt’s reform policies, known as the square deal, to give the average citizen an equal share of opportunities.