Does this make sense?: "The closer I came to the crickets, the more thirsty my ears became, crying for more music."

(and if it doesn't make sense, could you help me find the mistake and rephrase?)

Analyze the graphic organizer below and answer the question that follows. / which element is necessary to complete the graphic organizer? complex sentence prepositional phrase subordinate clause independent clause the. i think it might be c but idk