Hi, I'm writing an argumentative essay on why more american doctor should help with the uprising sickness and cardiovascular diseases and the poverty. Could someone read my intro and go over it
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Why is it that South Sudan and many other country's do not have proper medical care? Should more american doctors be taking action on the rising sicknesses and
cardiovascular diseases? But could this be endangering the lives of the american doctors or should we help face the uprising challenges that many south Sudanese people face unlike you and I? But unfortunately they don't have access to clean water, proper nutrition, and medical care. More doctors should help support the people of Sudan and many other country's. But with the help we could save the lives of children and adults

hey. It is pretty good but I don't know what's the relation of Sudan and American doctors . But I think your structure is Kind a Off at the end parts. Well, I am Not A Expert but this is just my view. Thank you

onto a large boat, and mark the water level that the boat sinks to. then, take the elephant out and put a bunch of marked weights onto the boat until it reaches the same water level. add up the masses of the weights to get the weight of the elephant.

working in public administration clerical support,what might one of your jobs be?

clerical work generally involves day-to-day office tasks, such as answering phones and entering data into spreadsheets. these tasks may be performed by secretaries, office clerks and administrative assistants. other duties traditionally associated with clerical work include: word processing and typing.

answer is a.returning items from customers that they did not find worth their money or b.collecting money from people with speeding tickets and filing the information

explanation:

b. collecting money from people with speeding tickets and filing the information is the correct answer choice