Read the sentences from the story. "The other windows are closed," Carlos reported, "but I can still solve this mystery."
"How?" asked Angela, curious about her brother's next plan. Carlos always had imaginative
ideas.
"Buddy really likes you," Carlos stated, staring at the contented cat in Angela's arms. "If you
go inside and call him, Buddy will want to come and see you. I'll follow him and discover his
secret entrance."
“That's a good idea," Angela admitted. Reluctantly, she gently placed the cat in the grass and
walked inside.
Taking a deep breath, she began calling Buddy's name.
Rewrite this part of the story using more descriptive details. Think about how Angela and Carlos felt
as well as what they saw, smelled, and heard.