How to I annotate long passages quickly

I'd suggest going skimming through first with a few highlighters, colour coding so one colour's for metaphors, another's for key quotes, etc, with whatever you want. You can also just go through with one colour, highlighting different language techniques. Really just highlight whatever u want to get out of the text.

Once that's done, read the parts you've highlighted more thoroughly and make notes in the margins with a pen/pencil. Comment on structure and language, that kinda stuff. After u do one thorough reading, skim through again really quick and make any other notes u want to.

I think that's about it! hope this helped!

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

yes the first one is correct .