Identify a successful thesis. Topic: A compare/contrast essay about two movies.
Movie one was better than movie two because it had a plot that was more fun.
Movie one was more entertaining than movie two because the plot moved along more swiftly.

Buck did not cry out. he did not check himself, but drove in upon spitz, shoulder to shoulder, so hard that he missed the throat. they rolled over and over in the powdery snow. spitz gained his feet almost as though he had not been overthrown, slashing buck down the shoulder and leaping clear. twice his teeth clipped together, like the steel jaws of a trap, as he backed away for better footing, with lean and lifting lips that writhed and snarled. read this passage. explain what the conflict shows about buck and spitz.