11. Which portion of the sentence contains a punctuation error?
Later the sky cleared and the rose garden was deserted, fragrant, and tranquil

i don't see anything attached can you attach something?

i believe the answer is: b. mr. head had a long, tube-like face with a rounded open jaw and a short depressed nose.

this is because in the un-revised sentence it said that mr. heads face was long and tube-like, and he had a rounded open jaw. this is not a very grammatically correct because of how it seems to drag on with the and, replaced with, with, makes it sound more fluent in the description.