1. Which reader feedback should you actually use as you revise your draft?
a suggestions from readers who "got" the purpose and message of your draft
b everything that every reader had to say about your draft
c comments from readers who had nothing but good things to say about your draft
d advice about how to change the message or overall point of your draft

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