What is wrong with each of the following thesis statements. Then revise each thesis to make it more effective. 1.In this paper, I will discuss the causes of asthma. which include exposure to smoke, chemicals, and allergic reactions. 2. Jogging is an enjoyable aerobic sport 3. The crime rate is increasing in U. S cities. 4. Living in an apartment has many advantages 5. Children's toys can be dangerous, instructional Or creative

In this unit we learned about arguments and rhetoric. in an argument we use ,not informal language

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What is the effect of narrator's word choice on the tone of this passage? the words "my heart shrank within itself" create a fearful tone. the words "wounded his fellow" develop a remorseful tone. the words "struck harsh upon my ears" suggest an irritated tone. the words "better-omened" set a hopeful tone. excerpt from "the cabuliwallah" by rabindranath tagore i was sitting in my study, looking through the accounts, when some one entered, saluting respectfully, and stood before me. it was rahmun the cabuliwallah. at first i did not recognise him. he had no bag, nor the long hair, nor the same vigour that he used to have. but he smiled, and i knew him again. "when did you come, rahmun? " i asked him. "last evening," he said, "i was released from jail." the words struck harsh upon my ears. i had never before talked with one who had wounded his fellow, and my heart shrank within itself when i realised this; for i felt that the day would have been better-omened had he not turned up.