Which sentences describe how Sara revised and edited her research report about the ERA? (Select all correct answers.) She added more and stronger transitions between sentences.
She added evidence that she had initially left out.
She re-organized all of her paragraphs.
She replaced informal language with academic discourse.

What do the topic sentences in a report show you?
the style and tone of the report
the purpose of the report
the report’s intended audience
the overall structure of the report

Which phrases do describe features of academic discourse? (Select all correct answers.)
short, simple sentences
longer, more complex sentences
a formal tone
advanced vocabulary

write a five paragraph essay, you were taught to have three body paragraphs. a university essay is more flexible than that, depending on its length and on what it is trying to say. a short university essay may have three body paragraphs, but it may have more.

invention of the washing machine

in the past, people used sticks and stones or scrub boards to clean their clothing. as it was sweaty, backbreaking work, we owe a world of to james king because he created the model for the modern washing machine in 1851. the most important issue was that this machine cleaned clothes while a person cranked the handle. doing this made people who used it develop strong muscles in their arms. later, in 1908, alva j. fisher created an electric washing machine named thor. this one was not the first automatic washing machine. however, it was one of the most popular models at the time.

yes? ? what is your question lol cos this isnt