The shift in this piece occurs when Edwards says
Select one:
a. "Therefore, let every one that is out of
Christ, now awake and fly from the wrath to
come."
b."...but here you are in the land of the
living and in the house of God, and have an
opportunity to obtain salvation."
c. “And now you have an extraordinary
opportunity, a day wherein Christ has
thrown the door of mercy wide open, and
stands in calling and crying with a loud
voice to poor sinners”
d. "How can you rest one moment in such a
condition? Are not your souls as precious
as the souls of the people at Suffield*
where they are flocking from day to day to
Christ?"

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1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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the bazaar because it represents the inaccessible land of freedom to the narrator. mangan’s sister because she represents domesticity and routine to the narrator. the marketplace because it represents the suburban lifestyle to the narrator. the church because it represents spiritual healing and renewal to the narrator.