What are three ways you can make your paragraph better in the revision process?

Explanation:

Think about your purpose in writing: Does your introduction state clearly what you intend to do? Will your aims be clear to your readers?

Think honestly about your thesis: Do you still agree with it? Should it be modified in light of something you discovered as you wrote the paper? Does it make a sophisticated, provocative point, or does it just say what anyone could say if given the same topic? Does your thesis generalize instead of taking a specific position? Should it be changed altogether? For more information visit our handout on thesis statements.

Check the focus of the paper: Is it appropriate to the assignment? Is the topic too big or too narrow? Do you stay on track through the entire paper?

the answer should be:

the intervention of the supernatural gives gilgamesh hope that he will defeat humbaba.

i think that the answer is substandard.