In sentence 5, Nick has not offered a strong controlling idea, or thesis statement. Which revision of sentence 5 creates the most effective thesis for this paper?

The correct answer to this open question is the following.

Unfortunately, you did not attach the excerpt, text, or the link to it, to know exactly what you mean by "sentence 5." Without this information is so difficult to help you.

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The revision of sentence 5 that creates the most effective thesis for this paper would be this one: "More interesting, however, is how this little dog earned the rank of U.S. Army sergeant and became a war hero."

This is the correct answer because, in sentence 5, Nick has not offered a strong controlling idea or thesis statement.

We are talking about the story of Stubby, a dog found in a military field in New Haven, Connecticut by a young man named Robert Conroy. He was a private in the military. The time, around 1917.

invention of the washing machine

in the past, people used sticks and stones or scrub boards to clean their clothing. as it was sweaty, backbreaking work, we owe a world of to james king because he created the model for the modern washing machine in 1851. the most important issue was that this machine cleaned clothes while a person cranked the handle. doing this made people who used it develop strong muscles in their arms. later, in 1908, alva j. fisher created an electric washing machine named thor. this one was not the first automatic washing machine. however, it was one of the most popular models at the time.

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