Write a paragraph about your first trip to the dentist. 65 points

my first trip to the dentist, my parents took me too a superhero dentist they gave me a cape before I went in to get my teeth checked. when they called my name I was scared and exicted at the same time they took me into the room and put tools in my mouth I started crying and I could not stop before that all I had heard about the dentist is that it hurts, and you cant breath, and all dentist are mean, why would anyone want that I ran out of there office and told my mom im never going back, but six weeks lator she made me go again and this time I was fine well beter  then i was before and there is nothing scared of  besieds cavities.

Explanation:

allusion   is the right answer

quite an interesting way to teach topic sentences, because the answer to this question is the best definition of a topic sentence that one can present, it is as if answering the questions taught you how to do it, this is some real teaching, it is terribly well-done.

the topic sentence in this paragraph is:

topic sentences writers stay on track and keep a paragraph from becoming an aimless collection of sentences about an idea.

which incidentally tells you what a topic sentence should be.