Help please I tried to to the assignment but my teacher keeps saying its wrong. Please do this ILL MARK BRAINLIEST. Write about your greatest achievement, and why it makes you so proud.

-Introduction

-First body paragraph

-Second body

-Third body

-Conclusion

i had the same assignment the introduction is what  the story  is about and you have to make it exciting so you can hook the reader like you explain it .the first body is where you write the  story. the second body is where you can make changes to the story to make it more juicy like add drama or something. the third is where you end the story. the conclusion is where you put the life learned lesson. hope this help.

Explanation:

irving effectively uses emotional responses to create suspense in the story.irving’s tone creates expectations for the reader, which in turn create suspense.irving’s suspense would have been more effective with more vivid details.irving’s story is not suspenseful