Directions: Follow the directions under each section of the workshop. Make sure your work is clear and legible, and contains proper capitalization, grammar, spelling, and punctuation where applicable.
Section Vill: Revising Errors
Revise the following passage to correct two fragments, one run-on sentence, one dangling modifier, and
one misplaced modifier
"Simone Biles"
Simone Biles is an American gymnast from Texas. She and her siblings grew up in foster care they were
eventually adopted. At six years old, a field trip to a gym inspired her to train as a gymnast. She entered
many competitions and improved her skills. At the 2013 American Cup, she competed in place of an
injured teammates unfortunately, Simone fell off the beam during competition and placed second. Her
2014 season did not start on time with an injured shoulder. Luckily, she her injury. Through hard work and
determination, she became the first woman to hold three consecutive all-around titles in the World
Gymnastics Championships. When she entered the 2016 Olympics, already the reigning national champion,
Biles ended up winning four gold medals.

Read the excerpt from julius caesar, act 1, scene 1. marullus. wherefore rejoice? what conquest brings he home? what tributaries follow him to rome to grace in captive bonds his chariot wheels? you blocks, you stones, you worse than senseless35 things! o, you hard hearts, you cruel men of rome, knew you not pompey? many a time and oft have you climbed up to walls and battlements, to towers and windows, yea, to chimney-tops, your infants in your arms, and there have sat40 the livelong day, with patient expectation, to see great pompey pass the streets of rome. which summary of the passage is the best? marullus asks a lot of questions, such as, “why celebrate? what has caesar done? who is following him to rome? don’t you remember pompey? ” then he says that everyone is cruel because they do not remember pompey. they forget how they praised him and would climb to the highest places, carrying their children, just to catch a glimpse of him. marullus regrets that the people are celebrating caesar and is insulted that they forgot how they used to praise pompey. marullus thinks that the people should celebrate caesar the way they used to celebrate pompey, and that they should be in awe of caesar’s greatness. marullus remembers how the people climbed walls, battlements, towers, windows, and even chimney tops to see the great pompey.

Understand that amassed in paragraph 3 means

Write a sentence for each of the four tenses using the subject artists and the verb create