Which sentences describe how Sara revised and edited her research report about the ERA? (Select all correct answers.) There are multiple answers!! She replaced informal language with academic discourse.
She re-organized all of her paragraphs.
She added evidence that she had initially left out.
She added more and stronger transitions between sentences.

in night, why are wiesel and his father evacuated from the auschwitz concentration camp? a massive escape makes the nazis question the security of auschwitz. they are assigned to work as laborers in a factory at another camp, buna. hitler has ordered that all remaining jews be relocated within german borders. the german army needs the camp guards to go to the battle front for a last-chance defense.

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