Can somebody help me with this 55 word scary story

The story takes place in a haunted house.A group of friends is playing with a ball, and the ball falls on the porch of the house. If they go there, the spirit of Mr. Williams, an old serial killer, may appear and lock them in till they die.It was a summer day, and the boys decided to play.The door to the house opened, and Luke was pulled in.They fought against a force to take the boy out.The ball and all the boys could get out.

Title: The haunted house.

During a summer day, Tom, Luke, Austin, and Jack decided to play football.

The ball landed on the porch of the house haunted by the spirit of a serial killer who locked the people in till they die.

He took it, but a force pulled him inside.

The boys grabbed him and pulled him out.

Explanation:

The story should have a main character or characters, an introduction, a problem, and an ending where the problem is solved. We have to use the same tense when we write and to keep the suspense and fear in a horror story. Also, the title should be catching and related to the plot of the story.

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