The assignment for this lesson is to play the role of an editor whose job is to help a writer improve the procedural document "How to Vermicompost." You'll evaluate this
document and then revise it to improve its effectiveness.

use it to buy the fattest block of cheese

the sun warms our planet, and with the moon, creates the tides. the moon orbits the earth and in turn, the earth orbits the sun. because they appear to be the same size in the sky, the sun, earth and moon work together to create eclipses. when the moon is directly in between the earth and sun

yes? ? what is your question lol cos this isnt