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Next question: Mustard or ketchup!

Bet you werent expecting this answer lol!

Explanation:

KetchupI dont like mustard and heres why

Back long ago my sister and I were home alone...We did weird bets like whoever won 2/3 rock paper scissors had to eat a spoonful of paprika weird stuff like that. Well, the time I lost the punishment was getting mustard splatted in your hair. She took a handful of it a splatted it all over me. I ran to the bathroom and started throwing up like crazy over the smell and when I thought I washed it all off it was still all over me. I didn't realize that until I got to bed and kept throwing up over the horrible smell...I got so sick over it that whenever there's mustard out i'm away from itkind of a weird trama lol but yeah i have moustardaphobia. So in conclusion I like ketchup better! Thank you for listening to my weird childhood have a great day!

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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