PLZ HELP30 POINTS +Brainleist Based upon what we have learned about dialogue, revise the two paragraphs below. Please use correct grammar and punctuation. If you need help or a reminder, go back and review the PowerPoint presentation that we went over in class.

Paragraph 1

Sam and Billy had been planning the surprise party for Jared for at least two weeks. They were excited that the day had finally arrived and that everything went smoothly. They had tricked Jared by asking him to shoot a few baskets, and then when they got to the gym, they made an excuse to go inside and check on something. When they went inside, everyone jumped out and yelled, “Surprise!” Jared was happy, and they all had a good time. It had been a success.

Paragraph 2

Tanya had not done her math homework last night, and she had hoped that Mr. Jackson would not find out. Sometimes he just went over it quickly without checking if everyone had done it. When she got to class, however, they went over the homework, and he called on her. She was embarrassed, and she told him a lie in front of the class to explain why she didn’t have it. She felt guilty after class, and she stayed after to tell him the truth.