Bastion realized that he left the following detail out of the second paragraph (sentences 3-6).
Both seemed too extreme.
Where is the most effective place to insert this sentence?

That alligator hungry. vittles very scarce that time a season. his belly be pinchin him hard, now. but bruh deer is fat, and so he is in heavy trouble. the alligator there in front of him. the beagles there behind him. what bruh deer gone do? he sees the alligator and he hears the beagles. how does the author readers understand what the word pinchin means?

Which sentence has the correct subject-verb agreement? most storms occurs at this time of year due to weather patterns. most storms occur at this time of year due to weather patterns.

I’ve given a lot of thought to what one of them should be, and the answer seems clear.