Once upon a time, there was a boy with his brother and his sister. They were preparing for the opening of the circus. Before the circus opening, they had a party with all their friends they played games, won prizes, and ate cake. The kids arrived at the circus to see how it looks. The performers asked the brothers and the sister if they wanted to help decorate the circus before opening. The party was the kids' cousin's birthday. The cousin wanted to come with them to the circus, but there was no more room in the car. On their way, they were talking about what they wanted for Christmas, the cousin wanted laser guns, and the sister wanted dolls. They were 30 minutes away from the circus until a police officer pulled them over because the cousin did not have a seat belt on. The police took them to the circus.

The circus was still not ready until the performers needed volunteers; the kids volunteered. They watched the show and had a great day at the circus. The End

Needs:
...the intro from lesson 3.

...a conflict

…needs two events of rising action (complications like the seat belt problem).

…there is no dialogue.

there is no climax.

...there is no descriptive language.

…many grammatical errors (phrasing is off).

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title is of there was brother and sister

600 dollars if i'm not mistaken.

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)