PART 2: INTRO REVISION #2 Look at this introduction. There are a few errors that need to be revised. Highlight the parts
that are boring or incorrect, and then FIX the intro by revising the incorrect parts (you
can copy/paste the parts that are okay and use them).
Nowadays, technology is advancing really fast. Sometimes it moves too fast. Inventions are
being made that we don't need or think about the effects. A lot of the stuff we make these
days is unnecessary and makes people lazy instead of actually helping people. I believe that it's
going too far and there's a lot of repercussions of that.
WRITE REVISED VERSION HERE:

  plan: i will begin with a quotation about the importance of unity in a community. then, i will state my claim that an activity will unite our school by creating a shared vision, purpose, and direction. in the body, i will use three main points that describe the different avenues the students can take: through a variety of clubs, through a special event, or through an awareness week. i will provide evidence about other towns that have unity activities and the kinds of events that they include. pictures will illustrate my three main points in action. for the ending, i will restate the main idea in a new way and pose a question to keep the audience thinking. 

choice 2 i like that prompt better.

one is a red flower, and one is the sky when the sun sets.

the answer is   c the cold war