Need to rewrite, adding descriptive language and sensory details. This is from "The Cask of Amontillado,"

A long time ago in the same town, two boys were born to different families. One boy was named Montresor and the other was named Fortunato. The difference between these families was many. Montresor’s family which consisted of only his mother. She did not care or even want him; she was never home and was always with a different man. Fortunato was born into a family that loved him from the very start. They adored him and always did everything with him. For a while they attended the same school, but really did not notice each other until the end of elementary school. They never noticed each other because Montresor was never the brightest student, always late to class and he would sometimes even miss it. On the other hand, Fortunato was a straight A student who never missed a class and was always on time. Montresor wanted to become a better student so to do so he wanted to become friends with Fortunato to better his future. This is how their relationship began.