Ca What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 13 to
improve cohesion?
She came home a national hero, welcomed by the prime minister of
Australia along with her family and friends.
O Coming home a national hero, Jessica saw the prime minister of
Australia; she saw her family and friends, too.

Delegates: representatives who cast votes at a political party's national convention. binding: if a primary or caucus is “binding” that means the delegates won in that contest are legally bound to vote for a particular candidate at the parties national convention.a primary is a preliminary election used to determine a party's nominee for a specific office. the winner of the party's caucus, or primary, wins the party nomination for that state. then the delegates meet at their party's national party convention, which is a formal gathering of all party delegates from all states.

Structure your essay into an introduction, body, and conclusion. make sure your essay focuses on a main idea, includes precise language to clarify ideas, and is written in a formal style. use textual evidence, including scansion, to support your ideas.

I'm guessing a 'fragment'. read over the sentence and question again before you move on.