Who likes this story i made chapter 1

once apon a time there was a boy named jack.

jack was a friendly kid who was crazy sometimes.

the bears were afraid of him and the town was too.

the myth said he eats soul's and they never came out.

chapter 2

the kid was lonley so he went to the devils to join them.

the devils were even scared of him.

then he went to the angels and yet the angels were scared of him.

then god said to him you always have friends.

and gave him a smile.

chapter 3.

the kid went around town looking for a friend he met someone.

the kid said hi.

the other kid said hello.

it turned out they were alike.

so they lived happily ever after.

i need more paragraphs

I love it! I think it's good so far. Just describe what he looks like a little more.

the illustration   that would give a reader a clear understanding of the text is a picture of men constructing the frame of a building.the frame is made of iron bars. the text describes the job of blacksmiths'. these were very organised and they had different names: "the driver" and "the heater". the text describes the way in which these men worked ; they worked iron pieces as if they were playing a sport. in fact, the text wants to show the men's skills. the text also puts some emphasis on the use of '' rivets'' in construction. this kind of nails were not always used in the construction of manhattan.

some examples:

"and with an underhand toss he hurled the smoking rivet straight at the catcher, who caught it in mid-air in his catching can." men's skills

"when the driver was ready for a new " the emphasis on the rivet ( special nail used in construction).

" it against a beam to remove any cinders, and jammed it into the waiting hole. " the emphasis on the rivet.

why did you delete the answer?