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English, 07.12.2020 23:50 yokis2710

HELP ASAP You will revise one body paragraph from your informational article. Then you will write a reflection on the changes you have made. You will submit the original paragraph, the revised paragraph, and the reflection paragraph. View the grading rubric as you complete your assignment. This is your guide to a super submission.

Review your informational article. Choose one body paragraph to revise. Copy this paragraph into a new document.
Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
Review your paragraph for any use of passive voice. Revise those sentences.
Write a short reflection paragraph on the revision process. Describe the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing.
Save and submit:
The original draft of your body paragraph
The revised draft of the same paragraph
The reflection on the changes you have made
Save your work to your computer or drive.
Submit your work in 02.09 Syntax and Voice.

THE PARAGRAPH: This is influencing the fishermen, purchasers, and individuals in general. Yet additionally the number of inhabitants in the anchovy populace. This influences the fishermen since they need to get fish to offer to the purchasers. Yet, likewise individuals in general since we eat fish however on the off chance that the jellyfish are eating to numerous there are dangers to the sea, also there are different animals that eat anchovies and if the jellyfish are eating them and were getting them to sell the animals in the sea won't have anything to eat and it will wreck the populace. But since if this does not get dealt with different creatures will be in danger.

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