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The meadow which was covered with  yellow, blue and white flowers was  a beautiful sight. The native gras ses were thriving because the whole  area, barring only the pasture had  become a registered nature reserve . In fact, it was so pretty that I  tried to take a picture, but then I  saw that my phone battery had died . Disappointed I walked back to the  hotel to recharge it.

The meadow, which was covered with yellow, blue and white flowers, was a beautiful sight. The native grasses were thriving because the whole area, barring only the pasture, had become a registered nature reserve. In fact, it was so pretty that I tried to take a picture, but then I saw that my phone battery had died. Disappointed, I walked back to the hotel to recharge it.

love, how my life is right now. you can be loved and can love others. sometimes you dont feel loved right now, dont worry, someone out there is loving you while you are away.

well basically since ima beginner people will answer any subject "right away"and if you get more points you could ask more questions or if you answer someone's question you get points