HEL I NEED HELP WITH MY ESSAY INTRO Rewrite it or make it better plz
Racial discrimination has been one of the biggest social issues. When people first
think of discrimination, they more than likely think about the ways people are discriminated against due to race. Racial discrimination has evolved into a major problem in our society. Explain the impact of a social issue over time. While racism is a huge problem in America, It can be reduced or potentially eliminated through effective diversity training programs in schools and corporate institutions and people should not be judged by their skin color.

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Racial discrimination has been one of the biggest social issues. When people first think of discrimination, they likely to think about the ways people are unfairly treated because of their race. It has evolved into a major problem in our society. Explain the impact of a social issue over time. While racism is a huge problem in America, it can be reduced, and even potentially eliminated through effective diversity training programs in schools and corporate buisnesses. People should not be judged by their skin color.

Racial Discrimination has always been a massive social issue. When discrimination comes to mind, a person's first thought is about racial discrimination. Racial Discrimination is a growing problem in America, and it needs to be stopped. Racism can be potentially eliminated if more diversity training programs are initiated in schools and companies.

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1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)