Can you correct the sentences? Please and thank you!!

I know for number one it's Dear, Mrs. Lamont, since it's a name so the comma goes before it. I'm sorry if I'm wrong

1. Dear Mrs. Lamont,

2. Harriet said that you would help me with my report.

3. " Did Juan finish raking your leaves yesterday," asked Mrs. Perez.

4. "Yes," said Mr. Sakamoto, " and he did a fine job."

5. Your friend,

6. Sara Jane said she liked the movie we saw.

7. Jeff wants to know if you will go with him.

8. Zorah shouted, " watch out below!"

9. Who said " give me liberty or give me death?"

10. Dear Senator Smith,

11. Sincerely yours,

12. Did you ask mother if I could stay overnight?

Explanation:

Numbers eight and eleven stay the same

Hope this helps :)

just to , the answer is b on edge