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To improve the logic and flow of the essay, the writer should revise sentence 5 by replacing the word “money” with the word “dough.” deleting the sentence to clarify the overall argument. inserting the phrase “are awesomely fast” after “tablets” to add personality. adding the transition “however” at the beginning to connect the ideas better.

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