Why is this an effective beginning? Read the excerpt from The Boy Who Hamessed the
Wind by William Kamkwamba.
The preparation was complete, so I waited. The
muscles in my arms still burned from having worked so
hard, but now I was finished. The machinery was bolted
and secured. The tower was steady and unmoving
under the weight of twisted steel and plastic. Looking at
it now, it appeared exactly as it was something out of
a dream.
0 It includes details.
It provides context.
It is surprising
It builds suspense.

Ineed badly ! i got to get this done and i can't get it done tomorrow! 1. expand the meaning of each sentence by adding adjectives. (dinner cooks.) (clown chuckled.) (car raced.) (dancer spun.) (panthers growled.) (leaves fall.) (bread baked.) (lake glistened.) (ship glides.) 2. using the sentences above, expand the meaning by adding adverbs. 3. using any five of the sentences from #2, expand the meaning by adding a compound word to each sentence. 4. using any three of the sentences from #3, expand the meaning by adding a prepositional phrase to each sentence. 5. using any one of the sentences from #4, expand the meaning by adding a synonym to this sentence.