Zach turned in an essay on humpback whales. His teacher explained the main message was unclear. How should he revise his paper?

He should develop the paper’s controlling idea.

He should write a new paper on a different topic.

He should restructure the paper by moving paragraphs.

He should make the tone of the paper much more formal.

He should make the tone of the paper much more formal.

Explanation:

If the tone of the paper is much more formal, then it can be easier to read and understand.

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here's some tricks. write on a book that you have read and really enjoyed. first, start by writing down basic event in the book. have your first paragraph be an intro explaining like the author, the reason the book was written if known, and other backround info like that. paragraph two explain what happens in the first few chapters and the signifigance it had. then for paragraph 3, do the same thing but for the middle. i'm pretty sure you get the point for paragraph 4. just rap things up and explain the call to action. for the final paragragh (paragraph 5) , explain your views on the book, the message, ect. tip: something that might is to go onto cliff notes or something and read the anaylisis of each chapter.

some books i recommend;

diary of anne frank

lord of the flies