In the space below, write a 500-word essay describing detailing which version of Romeo and Juliet represented the themes in the play more effectively? Shakespeare's play Romeo and Juliet or Baz Luhrmann’s 1996 film version.

While i will not write your essay completely, I will help you. look in explanation

Explanation:

Romeo and Juliet is a timeless story that is known worldwide. While everyone knows the version by shakespeare, it depends on who you ask. Younger generations and older generations alike have a soft spot for any movie with Leonardo DiCaprio.  Older generations did grow up with the traditional play and the movie does not appeal to them as much as it does to generations that grew up with this movie. I think that the 1996 film adaptation to Romeo and Juliet represents the theme in the play more effectively because it appeals to younger generations and it shows a problem that is going on in the current time.

heres a good opener for you.

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

it is true my friend