Can someone proof read this for me and check if it’s a strong enough summary?

Probably shorter.

Explanation: This really depends on how long the book is if its an extremly long book then this would be great but if tis shorter than so should the summary. You also want to make sure you don't go into to to much detail with summary's.

answer: my favorite subject is choir

explanation: it is choir becuase you can sing and have fun singing at the same time with your friends.

odysseus shows many acts of bravery in homer's epic poem the odyssey. first, he shows bravery when he tricks polyphemus, the cyclops, and gouges out his eye. this is an act of bravery. it will also cost him because polyphemus was the son of poseidon, the god of the sea.

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