Rewrite each sentence, adding at least two adjectives. 1.It was morning, and the sun rose on the mountains.

2.When I met Gloria, I could see she was a girl.

3.Louise had a dog.

4.Can you see that bird?

1. It was early morning, and the sun rose on the distant mountains. 2. When I met Gloria, I could see she was a bright, pretty girl. 3. Louise had a large, black dog. 4. Can you see that small, yellow bird?

faulty parallelism is a construction in which two or more parts of a sentence are equivalent in meaning but not grammatically similar in form.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

the problem is the last sentence, the first two have a basic subject+verb+object structure.

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in all three sentences:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

i love cake

and don't hate

i know i'm fat

but what's wrong with that

i cant rap

but im sure ya know that

its just for fun

so quit hatin' son

~courtney