Heres an emotional song I wrote can I get some feedback?

The dragon wakes is a metaphor for a big event; what is the event how does moonshadows belief about dragons him understand what is happening

Geoff bought a picture frame and took a picture with his parents because a) he wanted to be a notable athlete. b) he wanted to remember his trip always. c) he wanted to get into the hall of fame. d) he wanted a baseball player to sign it.

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